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Pain
Numbness, beyond the pain...
A shadow moves over the moon
To cast down doubt in the light.

Doubt in myself.
My life.
My love.
My ability to do what is required.

Apathy offers escape...
if only for a moment.

Doubt always returns to fill the void.
The void of my own unintentional creation.

Mayhaps loneliness is deserved
Warranted
Insisted on
for the here and the now.
©2008-2010 ~KaimelarFeylove
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I can't talk to anyone.
No one wants to listen.

So I write bad poetry,
grimace at it,
and decide to post it anyway...

because however horrid and unpleasant, however much I wish it otherwise, it is my truth.



I discourage criticism on this one, only because I probably won't listen with this one, so you can save yourself the effort... not that you would anyway. :)

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Beautiful, spare (in the good way), and achingly familiar. :) Could not have put it better myself. You did good, Kai.

--
Sergent, we have crossed a strange boundary here... the world has taken a turn for the surreal.

Captain J. Miller
"Saving Pvt. Ryan

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